This is a srtory im writting about inyuasha so please read it and reply now I will start.
"Hmm what the heck is that"? Inyuasha says. *Inyuasha runs and runs becaasue of the dump noise he heard. *Inyuasha jumps in the air and looks below and see s 2 people fighting and stop and look to see the 2 strangers in demon world fight. "Theres a warrior stranger and theres one who has red eyes woah this fight looks very exciting" Inyuuasha says". *Warrior stranger jumps up with his long and skinny sword and trys to slash the stranger with the red eyes. *Red eyed stranger dogdes all of the warrior guys attack and knocks the warrior sills with a slap to the face. *The warrior gets back up and picks up his word and starts wielding it in the air than he charges in with a slash attak to the head. *The red eyed stranger ducks and grabs the warrior by the neck and start banging him agianst the ground untal he dies. *Than the warrior starts bleeding from the neck than the guy who has the red eyes let him go than the red eyed stranger took out his claws and stabs the warrior in the stomach with his claws and he starts bleeding even more and more. "What the heck man there freakin going at eachother and man I would like to get a peace of the guy who has the red heyes and kill that batard" Inyuasha says. *The guy who has the red eyes comes out with a powerful flar attack and now Inyuasha is blind by it and couldnt see anything and now the like dinned down. "What the heck they disappeared" Inyuasha says hm im gone but was it real" Inyuasha says. *Inyuasha heres another bom!!! noise and starts running to the sound.
If yall like my fan fic and like it and post good reply than ill make another one in a couple of weeks maybe.
it's good, but it needs a lot of work. ask someone like Kagome for pointers :P
Ok thnx im working on it.
Wow thaks for the cool tips.