Always in the Rain...


(Character) Lana and Jake

I was always alone when I walked this path of the Rain

Although It just seems like everyday I walk alone

what is that in the distance? A shadowy Figure wonder who it could be?

maybe it is a guy or a girl...

hmm I can make it out what it is now

A boy? oh no! what do I do? what do I say? he looks nice

"Hey" I yell out, he then says Hey back

I blush, he laughs, then I let out a giggle, "How Are you"

"what's your name?" he asks, "I'm Jake"

"umm, I am Lana" I say back

"cool what are you doing out here in the rain?" Jake Says

"Nothing I like to walk here but it sucks alone" Lana says

"well now you have me lol"

"Yeah", I ask him a personal question

"Umm, do you think I am pretty?" She said

"well yeah you got a good body!" (laughs out loud)

"what does that mean?" (gives him a mean look)

"Nothing it's a compliment, also your hair is nice, really red!"

"okay, that's all I need to hear, now my turn, you look good too and your eyes are pretty blue..."

"Hey let's go to the fields on the outside of town" :gay:

"oh okay" what is he Thinking?

we go to the fields and lay there and look at the cloudy area. Jake puts his hand on my head to see if I have a fever...

Lana Says "You know, your taking good care of me, why is that"

Jake Says "well, I kinda like and I'm worried about you so is that bad?"

Lana Says "Well No because I like you too"

Jake then puts his hand down my blouse and feels my breast!

Lana Says "whoa, slow down there!" I didn't want him to stop...

Jake Says " Oh I am sorry I so didn't mean to do that, dang!"

Lana Says "it's okay I actually like it"

Jake Says "Really?!"

Lana Says " you don't have to get that excited..."

Jake Says "then you mind if I touch them?"

Lana Says "Go for it, no one is around anyway"

He starts to feel my breast then he squeezes the nipple of my right breast.I let out a yelp and blush immensely by now he wouldn't have got this far...Then he kisses me...

Lana Says "oh wow you are a good kisser!"

Jake Says " this is how much I love you baby, because you know I will always protect from being lonely...

Lana Says " huh, that sounded corny but okay I will accept it, I will cherish you as well"

Jake Says " let us go back now and walk in the rain some more so we can enjoy the weather of sorrow..."

Lana Says "Okay let's go, Walk always in the rain!"

LOL

that is so randomly weird, yet.. so intriguingly artistic. and deep in an amazingly strange way.

does anyone else get that feeling :P

i have a question.. in that.. would you infer that they will have sex right?

What I get from this is ... a very poorly done laugh..

So its not saying its bad because I did laugh.

ok so i guess it was just me :P

lol liminality got it right...

but yeah it was for boredom and for kicks as well
but my question to you guys is did you like it?

and yes it implies they were going to have sex in the field thank you and good day...

i like it :) i just read it again, it still has that mysteriously deep feeling to it. just cant explain it :P

wow didn't think anyone would read it agian lol thanks ^_^

Whyh would they Read it again? Huh

lol i dunno i just find it interesting to read :P

I'm guessing sohryu didn't like it lol

Well lol, no, i guess, im not Quilified enough to be Jugdemental like that that.. but. i mean common.. Why would you read it twice.. ? ^_^

well what's wrong with that? well the only reason I typed this is out of boredom...

and of course I liked the fact that I can create something like this out of nowhere... well it is from something but I can't say... let's just it is a story I made of Double Dragon that I hope to animate in the future...

I have no written document of it but a script of characters and it's all there in my mind :huh:

Seems a bit unrealistic how they meet and fall in love at the end of the day. But then again, it is fiction :P

Overall It's pretty good, but could use a lot more detail.

ah okay thanks! ^_^