Title: Drugs Are Bad
Description: DBZ
Ryosei_Hime - July 2, 2006 10:53 PM (GMT)
Well, I wrote this quite awhile back and it's supposed to be funny. I wrote it while quite hyper. XP A few of the DBZ characters talk to a bunch of middle schoolers about drugs.
Drugs Are Bad Thome - July 3, 2006 12:37 AM (GMT)
Too much description.
It flows like a slug in water.
I have had the same problem on lots of occasions.
But as far as fanfics go, it was great.
Ryosei_Hime - July 3, 2006 01:31 AM (GMT)
I hope you don't judge my writing by that though. I don't normally write like that but it was short, for fun and I was hyper. XD I did write like that a long time ago though. o_O
Thome - July 3, 2006 01:50 AM (GMT)
Oh no.
I try to criticize everyone on something.
Otherwise it wouldn't really be feedback.
^.^
Ryosei_Hime - July 3, 2006 02:38 AM (GMT)
I understand. I prefer feedback in most cases. When I'm trying my best at something. That way I can know what to work on.
animeglobe - July 9, 2006 04:15 PM (GMT)
not all drugs are bad though. you have to remember that
Thome - July 9, 2006 07:00 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (animeglobe @ Jul 9 2006, 11:15 AM) |
| not all drugs are bad though. you have to remember that |
Yeah, I know.
Like weed and oxy, bleh.
But crap like nicotine, herion, and alcohol just plain suck.
Ryosei_Hime - July 10, 2006 12:28 AM (GMT)
Yeah. That's why I kept Juunana on weed. ^^; My Mama and sister are potheads so I know a good bit about it.
Thome - July 10, 2006 01:30 AM (GMT)
Weed can ruin lifes too, granted. But you'd have to smoke a heck of a lot of shit.
(i'm high right now. But I only get high about once a month.)