Skrew it ppl are just gettin mad!
Uhh. . .besides the groetues amount of spelling errors, among other gramatical errors. Including other things including: The story not making sense whatsoever, the characters leaving no specific impact, and the senseless use of "bad language", this almost comes over into the complete pile of steaming crap that was regruitated by a french dog that has diarreha and AIDS section of the writting radar.Good job! :good:
LOL i diddnt read it but i did see all the time you musthave put into writing that!!!
Might wanta thicken up the plot a bit for my old fashioned tastes.