Title: [Poem] The Past
Vena Cava - June 13, 2006 06:19 PM (GMT)
There is no writting section to post this. Well, not that I can see O_o
Here is something I wrote.
| QUOTE |
The Past
I hear the echo in the wind,
It sounds like the past,
Something I remember,
Something I forget.
The past is a strange place,
No one dare to enter,
It's not unknown,
It's just concealed.
Hidden in the darkness,
Waiting to be remembered,
The things you did,
The things that happend.
You can't run from it,
The past is there,
But it's not visible,
But it is there.
So many things untold,
Truths laid to rest,
It's the burial place for lies,
It's the end of the line.
It haunts people in there sleep,
Awakens them at night,
Sometimes drives them mad,
Sometimes dies alone.
I hear the echo in the wind,
Unknown know more,
I know of the past,
I know the truth!
By Vena Cava |
NaotaInko - June 13, 2006 06:35 PM (GMT)
. . .Actually there is, it's called the "Stories" section, right above that "GFX stuff. And there's a poem topic in there, mostly it's Sathes stuff but there's about two other people that have a poem in there. (one being me, the other being some guy named Goob or something like that)
It's a decent poem, nice.
Liminality - June 14, 2006 04:36 AM (GMT)
nice, sounds like it could be the lyrics to a song. anyway i'll move this.
edit- my bad, its already moved haha
Clyphire - June 14, 2006 10:00 AM (GMT)
blue_impulse - June 14, 2006 10:46 AM (GMT)
I like poetry and I think its nice.
NaotaInko - June 14, 2006 02:47 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Clyphire @ Jun 14 2006, 10:00 PM) |
| I hate poetry... meh |
What's so bad about poetry?
Thome - June 14, 2006 05:23 PM (GMT)
I hate poetry as well.
Poems are just for people too lazy to wright a friggen story.
Vena Cava - June 14, 2006 06:29 PM (GMT)
Thome, that's just wrong.
I would love to write a story, but I can't. I have tried writting storys but they never work out. Why?
Because I suck at reading and writting.
And poety isn't that easy to write.
You try it.
Clyphire - June 14, 2006 06:34 PM (GMT)
I dont know why i hate it... I JUST DO OK!!! *crys and runs off*
NaotaInko - June 14, 2006 06:48 PM (GMT)
I like writting both, there's nothing bad about it if ya ask me.
Clyphire - June 14, 2006 06:51 PM (GMT)
Everything is bad abbout writing!!! It gives me wrist crapms!!
NaotaInko - June 14, 2006 06:53 PM (GMT)
Then that only proves your uncreativity and your laziness.
Clyphire - June 14, 2006 07:02 PM (GMT)
nah im not lazy... and im creative!
NaotaInko - June 14, 2006 07:04 PM (GMT)
No actully it does, it proves you don't like to write and therefore to lazy to write, and thus proves your uncreativity.
Clyphire - June 14, 2006 07:08 PM (GMT)
Say what you want but im not!!
NaotaInko - June 14, 2006 07:10 PM (GMT)
Saying that only proves your immaturity as well, now be quiet this is about poems, not you. Maybe all the poems should be moved into one topic, with the persons named after that all their poems. Sort of organized thing, ya know?
Clyphire - June 14, 2006 07:12 PM (GMT)
Thome - June 14, 2006 07:51 PM (GMT)
Believe me, I use to love poetry.
But then I realized that poetry is nothing but really short stories, that are made out to look far longer then they actually are. Name one difference separating VERY short stories from poems.
NaotaInko - June 14, 2006 07:59 PM (GMT)
Hmm, besides one being a story and one being a poem?
A short story is usually 10 to about 50 or so pages long and a poem is only up to 2 pages maximum, usually.
Vena Cava - June 14, 2006 08:09 PM (GMT)
Thanks for spamming up my topic guys.
I really loved the feedback that poetry sucks.
:/
To those who did give real feedback, thankyou :)
And all those who did make decent feedback, I have given you a rep point for it :D
But thanks to the great amount of spam this has caused, I am closing the topic.
Don't expect to see me posting anymore poems here.
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