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Fayt - December 23, 2004 06:55 PM (GMT)
Secret of the 2 Aura Stones
The Rejuinzen Trilogy

Actinia. It was the most peaceful land in the entire world. Until one night, something fell from the sky. It fell through the clouds, and into the shrine. Only three people saw it happen. Mr. and Mrs. Senzijn, and the Great Elder. They rushed over to the shrine and found a baby. He was still alive, after the fall. Well, Mr. and Mrs. Senzijn didn’t want to leave him there, so they brought him to the village and raised him as a child. They never thought, however. Where he had come from. Why he had come. What was his mission? But they did give him a name. They called him Senjiizin. His nickname was Lan though. All was well, except young Lan here had a secret. He had two sharp teeth. Sharp enough to pierce the skin of an ox. He was a half demon. A dog demon, to be precise. Nobody ever noticed, however. They thought his teeth were just a coincidence. At about the same time, someone in the galaxy was doing a ritual to the Rejuinzen army that would revive it. The devil army that destroyed the galaxy next to ours, Norktex, was being revived. The army that was sealed away in the three aura stones that were carved from a black hole. Now they’re coming for our planet, Zeen. Heed the warning. And find out why death is only the beginning.


Lan ran in a flash. He was the fastest runner in all of the country, probably. He could outrun anyone you name. He could even jump from tree branch to tree branch. Only he knew that it was because of his half demon blood. People were amazed at how fast he was, at the age of 14. He wore traditional Japanese clothes. Lan hid his fangs as best as he could, but he could do nothing about his claws. So he wore gloves. When his teacher asked him to take them off, he said he had a condition. His hair was long, so he didn’t even bother to wrap it up. People would often touch his long hair. He also had two bangs sticking out of his hair. His hair made him look cool, but they also hid his demon ears. His nose could smell the scent of anything, from bread to blood. He wore a beaded necklace that he couldn’t take off. It was tied to his soul. It kept his demonic powers from growing too much. There was another item on the planet that would keep his power in check, he could feel it. But he couldn’t find it, no matter who he asked or where he went. He was very powerful. Not with muscles, but with demonic powers. He could crush every bone in someone’s body if he tried. But he never did. He was pretty much arrogant. But he held back his temper. Who knows what would happen if his demonic powers were unleashed. That is Lan’s secret. It was his destiny.










Ring! Ring! Ring! Ring! The sound of the bell rang. School was out, at last. He head towards his and his friend’s hangout; a tree where a mighty samurai half demon seeking the power to become a demon had been bound to a tree for millennia. A priestess named Hakuro did this to the demon, but died by a wound he had given her. Her Sacred arrow, which sealed the samurai’s fate, still remained there. The first of my friends came running by. First, Renn showed up. He was a pretty much cool guy, except for the fact that he was a pervert. He was always attempting to touch a beautiful girl in a... inappropriate way. But he was not a force to be messed with. He is the descendant of a great monk that saved another world from an evil force of demons. Also known as the 4-demon army. He alone had saved the world from the thousands of thousands of demons. By using a special concealment technique, he sucked in all the demons into hell through a Rice bowl. But after sucking in such a large amount, he had been almost swallowed by the rice bowl. But, his cost of surviving was a powerful hole in his right hand that can suck anything into it, and then thrust the enemy into hell. The hole plagued the monk’s family, and the hole is still in Renn’s hand. He also were’s a glove to conceal the hole. He carries a praying staff around. You don’t know what could happen if a demon attacked from the outside land. I also carry a weapon, a swift sword that was pure silver, and indestructible. Renn jumped from behind me, thinking I hadn’t noticed {or smelled, in this case} him. He jumped behind me, raised his staff, and was about to hit me when... I swiftly turned around and deflected his blow, sending him rolling onto the ground. “Damn it! How do keep noticing and beating me!?” I turned around and saw he was wearing a traditional Japanese monk clothes. “What’s with those clothes, Renn?” I asked, still looking at him curiously. “First of all, stop looking at me like I’m a demon; Second, I just felt like it.” Gosh, sometimes Renn could be an obnoxious moron.

Before I got a chance to insult him back, I smelled Yuri coming. Yuri was a very pretty girl. She had long brown hair that flew in the wind. She also could kick any demon, or humans, head in two. She was the descendant of Haruko, and only she {And the rest of the female’s in her family} can master and wield the Sacred arrows. She always carried her arrows with her, and a knife for close combat. And to hit Renn with. The moment she was in site, Renn disappeared. Renn appeared right behind her and started to rub Yuri’s behind. For a second, she blushed. Then she turned around, pulled out her knife, and hit him with the flat side of the knife hard. Then she continued walking towards me. “Hey. What’s up?” I said. She grinned. “Nothing”. She was my childhood friend. You can tell by the way that she gets past my arrogance that she knows me very well. You can also tell that she likes me by the way she looks into my eyes. I also longed to admit that I liked her too, but romantic terms can even give a half-demon the creeps. I looked at her clothes; they were a traditional Japanese kimono of a priestess. “What’s with the sexy clothes?” I asked. Unlike when I said it to Renn (although I didn’t exactly say it like that), she took it as a complement. “Didn’t anyone tell you? Today is when you were Japanese clothes of you’re ancestors. You don’t have to wear one because you always were Japanese traditional clothes.” I looked into the sky. She knew that I didn’t care about not being a descendant of a powerful warrior, monk, or a priestess. As it is, I could beat all my friends at once without breaking a sweat. Any additional powers or skills may make my demonic powers grow until its more noticeable then a cockroach that could play soccer.

Then, the last of my friends showed up. It was Kari. While she was walking the monk appeared behind her. When he was about to touch, she did a back flip behind him, and as he turned around, she landed three punches in his chest. He fell backwards, swearing at Kari. “She showed him,” I muttered under my voice. She eyed my suspiciously. She was always accusing people, just for the fun of it. She was the descendant of a powerful warrior that mastered the Aerona Sweep; the most powerful and difficult move to be mastered by a swordsman. But, Kari hated to admit that her ancestor couldn’t achieve one hundred percent of the Wind Scar, and in the end it did him in. I too wanted to master the Wind Scar, but Mom and Dad wouldn’t let me. Most people who attempt to learn the Wind Scar did of stress or lose their sanity. If you are truly destined to wield the Wind Scar, you will let it find you, not you find it. Kari and Yuri laughed (By the way, she looks even cuter when she’s happy), and did a high five. “Good job! You showed that pervert,” said Yuri, still grinning. The girls gave another high five. I looked at her dress. She was wearing demon slayer clothes. The demon slayers wore a variety of weapons on them. They usually wore a big blade on their back, and they attach about five to seven poison daggers to their belt, plus a custom built Katana. They also carry a few shrunken blades. Some of the more advanced of Demon Slayers wore 2 chains to their belt, and attached two axe heads to the tip of the chain. It was hard to master, for you could end up cutting you’re self instead of the enemy. The Demon Slayer clan was a feared clan, but a cunning Demon tricked demon wolves to come, and kill the number 1 through 10 best slayers in the village. The rest were sitting ducks without their most powerful warriors. “Hello? Zeen to Lan?” Lan suddenly opened his eyes. His friends were waving their hands in front of his face. He had been deep in thought. “Tag!” Renn pushed me back roughly, them they all ran away. “The Hell?!” I yelled, and started chasing after them. Like I said, I am fast. I got the Renn out in two seconds, Yuri in three seconds, and Kari in 5 seconds. We met up again at the tree; them panting so fast it could make a dog jealous. “How... How are you so fast?!” A gave a shrug, and then I heard a scream. I rushed off to were it had come from. Renn soon heard the news. “But that is in the other side of town, at least a mile away. How did he hear that?” he asked himself. Then he and the girls ran towards the trouble.

Lan arrived very quickly. He asked what the trouble was. “There is a huge demon on its way to the shrine! If that shrine is destroyed... The city will be thrown into chaos!” Before he finished talking, I was already on my way to the shrine. I met the demon at the stair’s that lead to the shrine. “Back away... if you know what’s good for you?” I said, taking off my gloves. The demon replied in a strange voice “~Half-breed. I shall not back away. I know what is good for me. So I should not back away. ~” I gave a shrug. Demons, I figured, aren’t really good talkers. I pulled of my glove, revealing my long, sharp claws that could shred anything. I ran towards him, leaped in the air and was about to strike... but the demon dodged it easily. “That’s right!” I thought. I had no experience with my claws whatsoever, so I couldn’t use them! So I took my sword out and prepared to attack the demon. I sped towards him, leaped up in the air, and slashed the demon with all my power. It didn’t even dent the armor like skin of the demon. The sword didn’t match my power, so after another charge, the blade was spilt in half {even though it was “impenetrable” Kind of weird how those darn salesmen trick you}. I decided to use my claws, even if I didn’t know how to use them. I ran towards the demon, yelling as I ran. “I’ll just have to learn!” I roared as I jumped in the air and slashed the demon’s skin brutally. “~UUAAHHHH! ~” Screamed the demon countless times as the blood came seeping out of a huge hole in the demon’s body. I didn’t notice him. I stared at my claws. They were drowned and dripping in fresh blood. I had never killed anything or anyone. Not even a bug. And now this? Was this the joy of killing demons would talk about? My thoughts were interrupted by the demon’s rage. He rushed towards me, wielding a Gear Bola, a long spear with a fat tip to spread the hurt. I leaped in the air as he attempted to strike me with it. I dodged another strike, but I couldn’t recover fast enough to dodge another strike. It hit me narrowly on my shoulder blade. I did a back flip in the air and landed on the ground. I sat down, my left arm out of commission. Suddenly I had an idea. From the past perhaps. I remembered a move someone I saw once do. “I don’t have any options.” I muttered under my breath. I stood up, raised my hand, and roared the words. “Renzihan Konochina!” My claws hummed slowly with a irritating sound. An enormous wave rushed out of my claws, striking the demon numerous times. They didn’t hit the demon, however. They went through him. There was silence after the attack. Then the demon split into pieces, each piece falling in a different direction. The blood squirted everywhere, gruesomely. The blood splattered all over body and face. “Is... Is this what it means to win a fight?” I thought. I had no more time to think. I collapsed, weary from the bloody battle that would soon start my journey. Before I passed out, I managed to put my gloves back on.

I was in a dark place, a place where the powerful meet their match. He could see ancient scriptures, in which four beings were fighting against an army of demons and human alike. Humans that soul has been turned to the worse. They march on towards the four warriors slowly. Suddenly, the four summoned knights that had the words “The Cathedral Knights” written all over their chest plate. The knights pulled their lances of prayer and vanquished the warriors of Hell. The warriors of the Dark Forest. The warriors of Sin, the god of evil. Sin is the son of Signas, the evil overlord who was stopped by the Legend of Heroes. Signas’s final defeat took place on Eileen {formerly known as Jupiter}, a planet located deep in the cosmos. Signas, although dead had a reputation among demons of the underworld. He had done what none could do before. He had brought the underworld to the living world. As the final battle raged on, X2’s mighty sword split Signas into pieces. When his sword pierced Signas, the sword flew through the universe. This mark split Zeen into two continents; The Salience Plains, and the Underlain (also known as the Underloon). The Salience Plains was a place of happiness and faith. The Siliencians are very religious people. They worship the lord of good, X2, every day. The Songstrees of X2 is to sing at a ceremony once every 7 years that keep the pieces of Sin sealed away in the darkness.


Underlain is a place of darkness. The Underlain is made out of three parts: The outer ring, the Inner Evil, and the Under square. The Underloon had a ranking system; every demon would be ranked. The better the rank, the more feared you were. The king of the Underloon, also the number 1 ranked, was S. S was thought to be the most powerful demon ever. Even the people of Salience dared not to compare him to X2, for they would never live more then a day. Demons knew that S was even more powerful then Sin, the god of evil himself. Nobody knew his real name or his origins. Only one had ever almost defeated S. A mysterious aura unknown to anyone surrounded him, and his name was Garra. Garra, the legendary wanderer. Garra, the most damned being in existence. He is a half-demon, and he wanders back and forth between the two lands. To avoid him means to survive. To cross him means certain death. Garra and S tied in combat last time they fought, but rumor has it Garra has been training under extreme circumstances, and he and S will fight again one day. In the middle of the two lands is the Kunawui land. It is a mysterious land where none have ever ventured to. Nobody ever had had enough good Aura to go in. It is rumored to be the burial place of the Legend of Heroes and several other legendary heroes. Lan read the very end of the scripture, up to where the words were encrypted in gold print. It read, “Yukoma Yekshima” Lan read the sentence over and over again in his head. What did they mean? Then a sharp pain was felt in Lan’s body, and he fell down.

By the time Renn and the others arrived, the demon was dead. They saw my body lying on the ground, drenched in blood. Yuri ran towards me, tears shedding from her eyes. Everyone then took me back to my house. After I was laid down in my bed, my parents went outside to thank everyone for bringing me to my house. As they all went home, Renn wondered how Lan had killed that monster in such a vicious way. The next morning, I felt a lot better. People were surprised to how I could move after fighting a demon. As soon as I went to the old hangout, they asked how I could move after fighting a demon. As soon as I went to the old hangout, Yuri can running towards me. She hugged me deeply, launching herself into my chest. Through tears, she talked very slowly. “What happened out there? Are you hurt! Why didn’t you wait for us!?” she said between sobs. I had no time to respond. I was too busy blushing. “She had launched herself on me! In front of everyone!” I thought. As I got ready to return the hug, the sharp pain that was inflicted on Lan before returned. It wasn’t really physical pain, it was more like mental pain. I quickly ran away, worried that this pain might reveal my demon features. I ran quickly to a dark shed on the other side of town. There I sat for hours, sitting by myself for what seemed like an eternity. Then, the shed door opened. There was Yuri, her beautiful face looking straight at me. She came in and closed the door. She took a seat right next to me. “So, what happened out there?” she asked softly. I turned my head to her. I just couldn’t lie to her. So I told her. “Some... Something is happening to me...” I told her. “Like what?” she asked me. “I... I don’t really know...” I said. I decided to do something that I may regret in the future. After a deep and long sigh, I told Yuri an old secret of mine. “Yuri... I haven’t exactly been entirely truthful with you...” I closed my eyes, summoned all of my courage, and took off my gloves. She gasped loudly. “You’re...You’re a demon?!” she asked me, backing away slowly. I put my gloves on, trying to think why I had just told her that and probably ended my life, as I know it. “Not demon... just half-demon...” I waited for her to scream. Instead, she was smiling happily at me. “Well, that explains a lot of things!” she said gleefully. “You’re not... scared?” I asked, shaking like crazy. She put her hand on my cheek. “ I don’t care what you are, who you are, or how you look. I’ll love you forever...” She launched a kiss at me. Before I realized it, her lips were on my lips, and her eyes were closed as a tear fell from her eyes. I put my hands on her face, finally realizing that it didn’t matter how different I was. The room was silent for the next few minutes, Lan and Yuki still embracing. She released her face from the position, her face still smiling at me. “Do you... Do you understand now...?” she asked. I nodded slowly, as I felt the sharp pain once had slowly disappear. We decided to stay in the shed for the next few hours. In a hour, Yuki had fallen asleep on my lap. I was still awake, brushing her hair softly. She looked so cute (y’know I wouldn’t have said this years ago. Damn teenager reactions) just lying there on my lap. I brushed her hair over and over. A sudden striking pain hit my claws. It soon disappeared. I looked at my claws carefully. What was this pain? Why did it…feel so good now? Maybe destiny made that sharp pain from before hurt me, to lead my here. I fell asleep soon, and we were both sleeping together, the both of us happy.

Chapter 5 Part 1
We soon woke up and got out of the shed. It was about midnight, and the search parties seemed to have fallen asleep. There were a few people sleeping on the streets. Renn and Kari were on the ground, sleeping like the rest of them. They were extremely dirty, and so were their traditional clothes. “Poor guys... They must have been looking for us more then anyone else...” said Yuki, a touch of sadness in her eyes. I winked at her. “Well, we’ve gotta return the favor!” I said, picking Kari and Renn up. We walked them back to their houses, and put them in their beds. After that, we started carrying everyone in the streets and putting them in their houses. When we finished, we walked back to our own houses. It had been a good day, but the smell of a demon was near. I made a silent note to follow it after Yuki arrived home.

After I dropped her off, I went to find the source of the stench. The smell’s source was a demon on the outskirts of the village. Three rouge samurai were fighting the demon, and losing badly. I rushed over there to join in the fight. The demon seemed to be an aurabeast. Aurabeasts are a type of demon that uses defending techniques instead of attacking techniques. They have a Barrier Aura, which is the weakest kind of aura ever. This beast would be considered a dangerous beast if it had a stronger barrier. One of the samurai moved in for an attack. The beast hit his sword in the air, grabbed it, and stabbed the samurai in the leg. The demon moved in for the kill. As the sword came down, I came in. I jumped in the slash, and the sword broke in half when it hit my tough body. The demon stared at me, a dark glaze of hate emitting from its eyes. I stared back at it, and the demon stepped back. My eyes suddenly turned black, and my eyeball turned into a dark shade of red. The demon ran away quickly (why, is a good question), but it didn’t make it. Raising my claws, I said the words. “Renzihan Konochina!” I roared, and my claws started glowing again. I swung my claws down, and a wave came out. It pierced the demon’s skin. I turned around and started to walk towards the samurai, when I felt a sharp jolt on my arm. I looked behind me, and I saw that the beast was still standing. “Its aura must have saved it!” I said to myself. Then I looked at my arm. The demon had through a shimmer of the sword at my arm. The shimmer went right through my shoulder, and the blade was covered with icky blood. It didn’t really hurt, and I pulled out the blade. I took aim, and I threw it at the demon, striking its back. The demon fell down in pain, as the blood gushed out. I walked over to the samurai and helped them up. They thanked my, and ran away in fear. As they ran away, one of the samurai dropped something. I picked it up and examined it. It was rusted old sword. I tried to catch up with the samurai, but I couldn’t find them anywhere. It was like they had just disappeared into thin air. I decided to keep the sword, since it was a better choice then throwing it away. I hid it in my closet when I got home. Later that night, while I was sleeping, the sword emitted an incredible aura, maybe even stronger then a Dark Aura {The strongest kind of aura}. The aura attracted powerful demons, and the demons started moving towards my village. Although, even I would have my work cut out for me tomorrow…

Chapter 6 Part 1
In the morning, chaos was all about. Demons were striking the village hard, and the village was getting a beating. Most of the military force was still asleep, and the few awake were having trouble defending the village. I woke up early, and saw the chaos. I ran out of the door to see my friends awake too {in their pajamas!} Renn let out a humongous yawn, and closed his eyes sleepily. “What’s up?” asked Yuki. “I think that we’re under attack!” I yelled loudly, as I looked towards the battle. “Okay, first we-” I started saying, but Renn interrupted. “First we change our clothes!” said Renn, looking at his pajamas. Everyone agreed. I was the only one who didn’t change, because I always wore my signature clothes (XP). I rushed into my house and took out the rusted sword. I ran towards the battle. When I got there, I saw the town’s people fighting. I pulled out my sword and joined in the fray. I quickly killed one of the demons, and moved on to the rest of them. The town’s people watched in horror as I slowly killed all of the demons. I didn’t reveal my claws, and I used my sword and fists. The last demon rushed out and struck me with a spear. I jumped back quickly, but not quickly enough. My shoulder, which had healed overnight, was re-damaged. I glanced angrily as my eyes turned into the dark shade that it had been the day before. I quickly took off my gloves and shredded the demon quickly.

The villagers stared out me, then at my claws. They moved towards me slowly, having their spears and swords ready. They kept moving closer until one of them made a thrust for my arm. I dodged it, and ran away. I kept running away as the villagers ran after me. By now the military force was awake, and it’d be damn hard to get away from thousands of warriors. I saw my friends as I passed by. I saw a look of confusion on Renn and Kari’s faces, and a look of love and caring on Yuki’s face. I closed my eyes as I ran past Yuki, not wanting her to see me running away. I ran all the way to a dark alley. They ran right past the dark alley, to my advantage. My friends ran past me too, except for Yuki. She ran into the alley, without knowing I was there too. She turned around and ran into me. Right into me. Her lips were on mine. She backed up quickly, her face a bright red color. We looked at the ground for a few minutes. They the military force found me. I ran to the end of the alley. I’d run out of places to hide out! They closed in slowly, realizing that I could kill a lot of them in one slash. When they were about to strike, Yuki burst out of the mob. She launched herself on my chest, and she told the samurai to back away. They backed away slowly, keeping their weapons up. “Just because he’s half-demon doesn’t mean he’s bad! The wars have gone to you’re head!” yelled Yuki, crying. “Yuki…” I said, looking at her. The samurai backed up slowly, not dropping their weapons. The samurai returned to their homes to prepare for a village meeting. I wasn’t allowed to come because the meeting revolved around me. I laid down on my bed, and tossed a bouncy ball high in the air. I thought that I might have to leave the village, and become a true demon. Then it hit me. “Why was I able to kill two true demons easily when I’m a half demon?” I asked myself. Then a villager came to me and told me to come with him. I leapt up from bed and walked to the meeting.






Chapter 7 Part 1
As I went to the meeting, the villagers looked at me strangely as I walked to the meeting. I approached the village elder. The elder had once been the greatest warrior in all of the land. He aged over time, but he was still able to teach eager young warriors. “Young Lan of Actinia, you’re courage and strength is one that this village will never forget. For you’re courageous services to the village of Actinia, I present you with this Medal of Honor. You will be allowed to stay in our village!” There was a loud roar of happiness from the crowd around me. For the rest of the day, everyone partied. I also got another kiss from Yuki. I went home with my parents late at night. As I went home, a figure was watching me. I was too tired out to notice it {Damn wine!}. He swung from tree to tree, keeping a close eye on me. I’d soon meet him. Very Soon.

The next day, me and my friends were playing soccer outside. The whole village was on a holiday, called “Prayer Day”. On Prayer day, school would be cancelled. Then, at 5:00 pm, all of the family’s in Actinia would go into any nearby forest. The would cut down a tree and claim it there family stump in honor of X2. All the kids in Actinia thought it was a confusing and weird holiday, but with there being no school, they live with it. I promised my friends I wouldn’t use any demonic power when we play soccer, and I promised I’d go regular speed. Renn passed the ball to me, but someone intercepted it. I looked up to see a boy about the same age as me. “Well, well, would you look at what we have here? A bunch of nerds playing soccer.” He said, spitting out a toothpick. Renn rolled his eyeballs. “First, a demon. Then another demon. Then a horde of demons. And now we have a idiot who’s full of himself. Darn, will we ever have a normal day?” said Renn, rolling his eyes. “Who you calling an idiot, ugly! The name is Jin!” said Jin angrily. “Well, apparently, we don’t care. So get out of the way!” I said, not even looking at Jin. “Do you know those demons that came up before? I killed them! You should be thanking me, and swearing loyalty right now. Now get down and kiss my foot you ungrateful slime.” said Jin, flexing his muscles. I guess Jin doesn’t really catch up with latest news. “I killed those demons, stupid.” I said, bouncing the ball on my foot. “No you didn’t!” said Jin, realizing that he had just tricked himself. I kicked the ball to Jin. Jin tried to kick it, slipped on it, and fell on the ground. “You… You big idiots! I’ll be back!” said Jin as he ran away. We all fell with laughter. “Mr. Tough Man slipped on himself!” yelled Renn through tears of laughter. We stayed there, laughing and insulting Jin while playing soccer .By five o’clock, I was on my way to a forest. As my mom and dad looked for a good tree, I wandered off. As I wandered off, I sensed someone in the trees {the person from yesterday!} A threw a rock into a tree. It hit someone, and he fell down. It was Jin! He snapped his fingers quickly, and about 100 ninjas came out of the trees. Jin grabbed his katana, which had been hanging on his belt. “I told you not to mess with me! You’ll pay with you’re life!” roared Jin. “Where did he get so many ninjas from?” I asked myself. “Charge!” screamed Jin as the ninjas all tried to attack me. I grabbed for my sword. All of the ninjas jumped on me. All 100.


The first wave of ninjas attacked quickly. I dodged them all, and slew them as fast as I could. Their comrades watched there fellow warriors fall, and a second wave came. This one was much more skilled then the other one. I got stabbed several times. They retreated after I killed a few of them. A bunch of ninjas armed with boomerangs arrived on the scene. They all through the boomerangs at once. I started to panic. I swiftly tried to dodge all of them, but failed. I was hit over and over again, and the ninjas didn’t stop. I was being hit in the air. I started to get pissed off. The dark shade returned, and I did something so horrible I wouldn’t even dream of doing it when I had complete control over myself. I caught one of the boomerangs and threw it at one of the ninjas with my full power. It sliced right through him, and his upper body slipped off gruesomely. The ninjas gasped at their fallen comrade. He had a bunch of blood squirting out of his stomach, the fluid pouring out like a mountain. The ninjas backed up, finally realizing they weren’t against the average boy.

I swiftly landed on my feet when I hit the ground, and I started walking towards the ninjas. This time, all of them ganged up on me. As I took out my sword, it started to have a pulse. The sword transformed into a huge blade, a giant Ninyouu sword (a sword that was held my the most worthy of warriors. It’s large. Since I was in my “weird” mode, I didn’t realize it, but I attacked with it. With one swing, I gave fifty ninjas a free trip to hell. I slew the other ninjas quickly too, and I turned my sights on Jin. He was cowardly huddling on the ground, his body shaking. He desperately reached for his pocket. He took out a whistle, and he blew it loudly. A form came out of nowhere, holding a spear and a sword. He was a ninja! “You…killed my pupils…” he said to me, looking at his fallen students. I didn’t reply. I charged him, pulling out my sword. I thrust the sword towards the ninja, but I missed! He was sitting on top of a tree, laughing loudly. “My pupils lost to this demon! Hahahahahahah!” he said as he jumped down from the tree. As he landed, he through a sharp rock at me. It hit me smack down on the face, stunning me for a second. I looked back at him, but he was gone. The rock had been a diversion. I sniffed the air, looking for the ninja’s scent. I didn’t find it. I transformed back into the regular Lan, and I walked away, leaving death in my wake.






I caught up with my family quickly. They asked where I had been. I told them I had wandered off on accident. They believed me, thankfully. Prayer day soon ended, and I went home and took a rest. The next morning, my friends came over to my house at 6:30 in the morning like they always do. We watched TV, ate breakfast, and ran towards school at 9:00. School didn’t start until 10:00, so we just hung around with everyone. Of course, we didn’t hang out with each other; the girls went with the other girls. I and Renn hanged out with all of our other friends. “Man, Lan, you got to tell me! How was Yuki?” Stevo, one of my other friends, asked as he grinned as if there was no tomorrow. “Dude, stop pressuring me like that! I’m not any pervert, unlike you!” I yelled at him. Seriously, I was getting PISSED at him. He wasn’t the only one; everyone was asking me about it. I wondered who was telling people these silly ideas, but then I remembered my good friend Renn, AKA the mouth. Phew, I was really glad when school finally ended. As I left school, I raced for home, taking my time going through the alleys- I didn’t want any more questions. When I got home, I took a short nap and wandered around outside. As I went into an alley, I saw 4 guys ganging up on a girl! I went in their and kicked some butt, blocking only thought and pushing. I don’t want to kill anyone; after all, I had just been accepted into the village. After they all ran away, I went to the girl and asked if she was okay. She looked at me like she had a spear stuck in her throat, and then she ran away. I asked myself why, but I knew why. She was afraid of me. My strength. Heck, she may have even seen my teeth.







Meh, thats a little of it,

dualist - January 1, 2005 07:27 AM (GMT)
Oh my good lord that's more long than long. It looks good though but I can't be fucked to read it at 3:30 AM :P. Probably tomorrow. And I can't believe I just noticed this topic. Shame on me.

Coconaught - January 1, 2005 07:49 AM (GMT)
wow maybe you should of done 1 chapter at a time i only got through half of it but it is really good so far. I'll read the rest tommorow

Naruto-Uzamaki - January 1, 2005 08:28 AM (GMT)
hm, i cant read right now, my eyes r blurry but im hyped up, lol.

Fayt - January 4, 2005 08:20 PM (GMT)
lol, you think thats long? o_O

Try reading the whole story.

Coconaught - January 4, 2005 08:53 PM (GMT)
when are you gonna post the rest if you are? It is a really good story.

Sathe - January 5, 2005 07:51 AM (GMT)
Nice. I got through the first 5 words. I'll have to read it tomorrow when I can find my hot scksy glasses and I'm awake. But it looks awesome. And I mean super awesome.

Crypt - January 9, 2005 02:20 AM (GMT)
Beh! I fell asleep in the middle of it.


Nice work!

DragonBallXCleader - January 20, 2005 02:23 AM (GMT)
Its really nice.

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Kobius - May 19, 2005 07:07 AM (GMT)
awesome!




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